Dragon RPG

Write a little longer please!
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As the former king pushed through the cobwebs, Durothain stared and saw an iron door. The former king unlocked several locks and Ize scratched the door viciously and the door opened. Blue light scanned Ize and Ywan.
Heavenly voice: Ize and Ywan, enter first before your allies.
Ize stepped in and Ywan followed. Pyeurodyn's eyes appeared. His eyes were a light, godly yellow however veiny. Durothain gulped and Ketesh couldn't believe his eyes.

Ok...
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I stay strong seeing the yellow eyes, I then kinda shiver "Creepy." I say
Ketesh his eyes wide
Red wing:"Whos this?" I say

Ize: Pyeurodyn. Hes the elder of elites. My father.
Ywan: He cant hear us but he can see us.
Ize: This isnt him, its more like his alarm bell.
Ketesh: So technically, this ISNT the study?
Ywan: Yup. we came here to ask him what we can do.
Ize: And how.
Durothain: How? didn't you mean he couldnt hear us.
Ize: No worries, he does somehow.
Ywan: Maybe by reading our minds. I'll never know.
Pyeurodyn: Bring the fire kingdom into here but keep them clear of the elites circle. Then they'll be safe. On the day of the event of course.
Ywan quickly wiped some dust of off his spec. The former king thought this would happen.
Pyeurodyn: Ah, so this is the young king? Thank you for telling me that old friend. And durothain, your adventure must've been pretty long,tiring and of course, weird.
Durothain scratched his neck.
Pyeurodyn: Its ok, your secrets safe with me. Young king and durothain you may leave.
Durothain bowed and left right after Ketesh.
Red wing left staring at the large but amazing eyes.

I leave and step on something sharp "ow." I roar loudly. I try to make my eyes bright enough to see what I stepped on even though the fire kingdom can do that, I decide it's just a rock and keep moving. what did I step on?

The former kings was tired and left too. Ize and Ywan did an elite bow and the eyes dissapeared, making everything pitch black. Ize, Ywan and the former king left the room and went back into the royal lounge. Everyone was sleeping. Apart from the squires.
Squire1: The attacker wasn't a threat. It was an acorn that fell from a tree.
Former king: Oh right. You guys had better leave and get back to your knights.
All squires: sir yes sir!
The small raptor squires scuttled off. Ize curled up right near the warmth of the fireplace. Ywan stretched himself out onto his back and slept. The former king's eyes stared at the unusual elites.
Former King: How unique...
He turned around and saw red wing.
Fomer king: Red Wing! Why hello there!

I smile "Hi." I try to fold my wings in so then my large wings, I then get pain through my leg after I stepped on something sharp so I fall down, "ow." I say and turn onto my back and rest my head and fall asleep.

Ize was the only one awake. He couldn't sleep for hours. Abruptly he snaked his head out of his coiled up snake-like tail. He reached his small hand to poke Pearl up from her sleep.
Ize: P-P-P-Pe-Pearl... Wakey wakey eggs and bacey...
Pearl: Ize?
Ize smiled at Pearl and waved.
Pearls rubbed her eyes and sat up. The floor was a comfy place to sleep for her.
Ize: Im bored... and I can't sleep!!!
Pearl grinned.
Ize: Why are you grinning?
Pearl: Because thats what makes me sleep; my mom used to grin at me and I fell asleep straight away.
Ize: But i had a nightmare...
Ize put on his sad face and widened his pupils to make himself look cute and scared. Pearl giggled and held her hand to her mouth. She didn't want to wake anyone. Suddenly there was a crackling sound. Pearl looked over the sofa. Ize rubbed his eyes and wiped some drool of his forehead. He looked up and saw Lossy in his bat-like form. Drooling, snoring, grunting and burping every awkward few minutes. A gasp came from Pearl.
Ize: Whats wrong pearl?
Pearl's eyes widened in the darkness.
Pearl: ghost...
Pearl lost her summery pinkish-green glow and Ize's manes fur stood on end.

'Who laughed?" I Say and get up then a loud bang rings out then I rose up on my feet in 2 seconds. "Wow..." I say looking at ize and Pearl "The love site." I say teasing them both then something went down my back and amde me roar "THERE"S SOMETHING IN HERE!" I decide to blow fire at the ceiling breaking it open, "Wake he others there possibly-" I puase seeing something whereing a black hood and a ghost "Wake others up Ill take care of this guy!" I then realise there was a long sword being held in the ghosts hands "Umm..." I roar waking the others up "GET OUT!" I run and the ghost charges at me.

Ize's icys skin turned a weird bluey red. Pearls twitched andstared at red wing.
Pearl: We were just talking... not any love...
Ize uncoiled himself and sent an ice ball at the weird ghostly figure and began mumbling words. All the elites stood up in a matter of mini seconds. A small creepy crawly passed over pearls left wing.
Pearl: GETTITOFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
Ize breathed a cold breeze at Pearl's back. Pearl grabbed the creepy crawlie thing and it was dead, thanks to Ize's stinky breath. It looked somewhat like a giant maggot, sort of the thing myth dragons use. Nova used her eagle eyes to see under the black hood of the ghost stranger.
Nova: Status report: Golden necking with a frilly light blue mane. The nose is blue. Looks very much like a young myth dragon in shape and size.
Nova sounded so robotic. She was awoken by power and Ize is using her as a puppet. If he didn't, the ghost would already be stabbing us in the chest. The ghost became scared. Never before in his life did he think he'd be attacked.
Ghost: MERCY! PLEASE!
Ize, Pearl and Red wing stared.
The ghost knocked off his uniform to reveal an underpayed, forced, young, toll-boy myth dragon.
Aqua: Well, well, well... look what we have here... Mr Immature.
Ize was startled when he heard aqua. He didn't know she was awake. Aqua was clearly talking to the bewildered toll-boy.
Myth Dragon: THE ECLIPSE IS COMING EARLIER THAN YOU THINK!
the myth dragon vanished; his little maggot came with him too.
Lossy fell onto Ize's back.
Lossy: Sorry prince...
Szo mumbled and was hanging onto a chandelier.
Pearl: Thank elders...
Szo realeased his grip and fell on pearls tail.
Pearl and Ize let out a moan of pain.

Is Ize a male?
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As I forget my hurt leg, I had more problems, I was being chased after. I see Ize and Pearl moaning in pain and I go down over and look down at them and say "Ize turned blue." I say, Just then before I say another thing I heard a gun, "Humans." I say looking back then humans with dogs appeared with guns It was a sneak attack.